Pharwynd
Modi Master Founder
Posts : 774 Join date : 2010-07-24 Age : 36 Location : Victoria, Australia
| Subject: Final Draft Thu Dec 08, 2011 2:04 pm | |
| Introduction:"Please present in posts below your pieces to be critique and/or your constructive criticism of other pieces presented. These threads are designed to assist and help artists improve, learn and gain confidence in their work and presentation of said work. Anyone who does not abide by the rules of this forum, Signature Rules and/or the rules of our critique section will be met with swift action of which in some cases will equal an immediate ban." This is where you shall present your FINAL DRAFT!! for presentation, last critiques, comments, assistance, compliments, adoring fans underwear will be thrown/presented here. While by this stage your piece should be looking pretty darn smexy we still advise to take all criticism underwing, even if it is for a future piece. So I invite everyone to participate in this section as both a presenter and a critiquer, and most importantly... have fun and stay creative =) For a full explanation of the Critque Section, Rules and more please follow this linkYou should no longer need this section by this stage, but if you do just click to view =) - Spoiler:
EXAMPLE:You are welcome to use your own structure/format as long as the Yin-Yang rule of equallity is maitained (as well as following all the other rules) and your criticism is CONSTRUCTIVE. { Cyan= Optional but highly recommended} - Quote :
- Basic Critique Structure
__ Chosen Piece: Batman by Pharwynd
1)(Compliment): I liked the water effect Explanation: because it made it look like he was actually hitting the water, also the “flatness” of the water fitted in with the lego/painted like look.
2) (Critique): I didn’t like the water effect Explanation: because it ends on the sides and some places at the bottom causing it to float, and become more of an effect rather then batman actually hitting the water.
Suggestion: Revision of the piece in respect to water effect Links: http://tutorialsofawesomeness.com/watereffect
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